March 29th, 2011
Medan Town
As we can see, in Medan, too, these problems occur among us. However, I can say, the education in Medan is starting to be better. We can see it from the students in this town that has followed some of the competitions and some of them, too, became the winners in the competitions among the other competitors in this country. Besides, nowadays, there are so many schools built by the government, also by the non-government, too. They make the quality of education higher. Other than by building schools, the government makes many programs that help the poor citizens that could not get the educations.
Although the programs have been made, but, there are so many citizens that still don’t care about the education.
These problems occur maybe because they don’t know how important the education is. Do you know how to solve this? In my opinion, I think the government can held some seminars with the themes about the importance of the education.
This part is a bit more problematic than the first, because you switch between topics instead of focusing on specific ones. The specific example of Medan is a good one (if it’s true) but the sentence following it makes little sense and doesn’t connect to Medan at all. Then, from talking about the students in your town you suddenly switched to schools built by the government (and it should be “and by private sources” or something to that extent instead of “also by the non-government, too) – which is a good thing to include, but shouldn’t be there.
Your last paragraph is good.
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